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Feedback (AKA: criticism)

  1. Halite75
    Heh, replying is not spam! I knew you were doing something with opacity to reflect the moments, but me it makes it difficult to know where to look. I don't know if I'm saying that right. How about having the two darker opacity ones in the center (closer to each other) and the the two lighter opacity ones on the left and right sides?
  2. khoakhung
    khoakhung
    This is my newest set, its very sensual
    i really like it but, i wonders if my skills are degrading.....
    and i'm still not sure if i should keep this for myself or auction it off......
  3. Halite75
    Halite75
    It looks nice and smexy, but what does "Waiting Tone" mean?
  4. khoakhung
    khoakhung
    LOL its a song name, although Naruto and Sasuke have no phones [or cellphones], the song really describes their love,
    i forgot to say the song is truly named "Ring back tone" by Sunny Hill,
    maybe hearing the lyric you'll understand it more,

    I erase that person's number from my phone
    And I erase the last 3 years with them

    Hearing this song, hearing my heart
    Now, I can't meet you again the second time
    You already seem to be the loved one in my heart
    Instead of playing this song, I'll let go of your love

    I hear this song over your call
    Maybe you'll call and say a last farewell
    Like this you know you've let me go
    You didn't get my call, you couldn't just hang up

    I'm very thankful, but very sorry
    Don't forgive me

    I can't answer you; just come back again~

    Hearing this song, hearing my heart
    Now, I can't meet you again the second time
    You already seem to be the loved one in my heart
    Instead of playing this song, I'll let go of your love

    I hear this song over your call
    Maybe you'll call and say a last farewell
    Like this you know you've let me go
    You didn't get my call, you couldn't just hang up

    I'm very thankful, but very sorry
    Don't forgive me

    I can't answer you; just come back again~

    During one painful song for me
    My deep heart left behind the wounds~

    You forgot me; hang up the phone
    I let you go first, and it all ended
    If I hear your voice, I might shake
    Instead of playing this song, I'll let go of your love.
  5. cabbit_girl
    cabbit_girl
    hello! I don't use photoshop...or gimp...but I still would love some feedback DX

    this was my attempt to make a sig with a transparent BG.
    I used opencanvas to put the sig together...and used GIMP to make the BG transparent (cuz OC won't let me do that)

    here I removed the fill in color from the bg with GIMP by erasing and blurring



    and here is when I realised I could save my OCI files as PSD files...and just deleted the BG layer in GIMP
  6. khoakhung
    khoakhung
    OHHHHH i really love this one, the less blurred one is simply wonderful
    such an amazingly simple but pretty set is hard to see these days..
  7. crisislover
    crisislover
    of we doing sigs? I have icons I'd like feedback on:
    (From beginning to most recent!) from 2004(5)-2010













  8. Flei
    Flei
    crisislover: Holy— Talk about improvement! 0.0

    Really love the designs and coloring of your icons. You seem to have a good eye for matching the background/texture to your base.

    IDK if you want crit on your coloring, but since it is part of your icon, I thought I'd just mention some things. I really like how you color, but sometimes the coloring looks too soft; maybe sharpen it a bit more? And in a few of your icons, the color of the skin seems too dark and doesn't match well with the bright texture/background.

    My fave icon of yours is definitely the third to last one, the one with the dark-haired chick. It looks really nice~ o/ And I really love how you did the hair in the last icon. Shiny shiny shiny~
  9. crisislover
    crisislover
    Ah thanks, my most recent colorings are the last three icons in that line. It also depends because I used different programs in the past so I didn't always get the same results there. I change my coloring about 2-6 times in a few months and overall only 3-4 are ever released. I don't have much patience when my laptop is overhearing ;_; and when I don't have photoshop on my home computer so I have to do with it.

    I really like the hair too for that last one, the 'chick' you're talking about is a guy XD his name is Ruchiru (Lucille as translated by the scanlators) by kaori yuki which I need to finish scanning -_-;
  10. Spamoni
    Spamoni
    OK so i actually just started using Gimp and i'm not that great but here we go! Please let me know where i can improve. There's always space for it!

    This isnt the first one i did but its pretty close to it sooo here ya go


    my latest inspired by Norah Jones' Song come away with me, i thought it fit them
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