Beggin for Reviews? this thread is for you

We all want reviews, this thread is for those that really just want someone to review their stories. It's also that they don't clog up the rest of the group threads. So just post a link and I and maybe some other members will get around to it.

I'm gonna toss this one out there since I'd like a bit more variety in my reviews. There are about 3 people religiously reviewing Low Down and Out, but a few more couldn't help. You can check it out in the link above. Any and all comments are welcome. I've got a thick hide. :3

I have always wanted to be a writer and I read a LOT so I gave it a shot, but I would like more than anything to have someone review it and point out any flaws in my writing so I can fix it. I really hope to make a career out of this since I am still young. So if anyone would care to help, here is a link to one of my stories http://aarinfantasy.com/forum/fictio...yuserid=331729

Oh how I wish this was alive typical *sigh* only now if notice this
Nuuuuu
But here's my story and I would very much like more reviews
http://aarinfantasy.com/forum/fictio...09354&catid=32