How's my KakaIru smut?

I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post this smutty question, if i'm not allowed to, tell me please!

Never mind, I decided to delete the preview of my KakaIru smut, I don't want to get into trouble... ... but this is my first fic, so I want to do well, so I would like some advice and maybe ideas for the story overall if you want since I could use some of those, if you would be so kind.



I'm doing a birthday fic for Iruka! I'm making him younger though, say 24.... And I think it will turn out to be a multi-chapter fic, with a lot of smut, and maybe Kakashi proposing, possibly mpreg, and such...




So, any ideas?

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